I just published the first 4 episodes of my very first story. I’m not happy with it but I want opinions before I completely scrap it.
Can you retype the name out for me of your story?
I’ll do a r4r with you and I’ll let you know what I think of it!
My story is Called Alone Till There Was You
It’s called The Peculiar Life Of Eleanor
Thank you I will go read it! The writing in the photo was hard to make out because its so small!
Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Being the Hybrid Queen is not easy. War, love, and betrayal awaits.
New episodes every week!
Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter
Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization
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Here is the description of my story :
Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 11 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736
I wanted to tell you I read your story!
It is good. There is a few spots that could use some work like facing the right way in the scene but other then that you have done a good job so far!
Like in this scene make sure Brandi faces Eleanor when she is talking about her hair!
And when she enters the room make sure you say @ELEANOR enters from left to screen center
@ELEANOR faces left
This way she enters faces right but then before she starts talking to him she faces left so she is looking at him!
But all in all it is a really good story. I really hope you write more!
Yes, I knew about all those errors but to be perfectly honest I just kinda gave up on the story. I didn’t feel like it was good. I’m glad you enjoyed it though.
Yeah it wasn’t a lot just a few here and there! But I really did like it!
Hey I’m down for a R4R
Title: Skai’s Stories
Episodes: 4 ( More coming soon!)