Finished your story! I loved that Lucy’s character was loveable and realistic, and makes readers feel sympathy for her and her mom. Each chapter’s length is just right, and the overlay uses are wonderful. My suggestion would be to manually code the speech bubbles because some of them were placed awkwardly, and as a reader who doesn’t do CC, the long customization part with its description of what we were supposed to do was a bit annoying for me 
but overall, good story! The ending of chapter 3 was really terrifying 
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