Hey guys! After a two year hiatus, I’ve just published my first story! I’m super excited about it and I would love to have your opinion. Once you read my story, follow the format I used for my story (below ) and I will read the first three episodes and give you honest feedback! Thank you in advance!
EDIT: I AM LOOKING FOR DETAILED REVIEWS OF MY STORY. I THOROUGHLY REVIEW THE STORIES YOU LEAVE ME, AND I WOULD LIKE THE SAME FOR MINE! THANKS!
Author: Linnie R.
Episodes: 4 (ongoing)
Episode Description: After meeting a mysterious man during a girls trip to Las Vegas, you find yourself tangled in international celebrity drama. How will you fare as you face limelight and love? CC
Full Description: During a girls trip to Las Vegas, you meet a mysterious man in a night club. Turns out he’s a runaway South Korean pop star, and it’s up to you to save him. What will happen as you enter the South Korean limelight and start to fall in love?
Bonus: Customize YOURSELF & THREE FRIENDS!
Half my characters are South Korean and half my story takes place in South Korea, so if you can help me with Korean honorifics and other aspects of Korean language/culture, I will give you a shout-out in my story! I tried my best with it-please understand that I mean no harm with anything I may have gotten wrong! I want my story to be as realistic as possible.