Hey Dear 
I’ve just finished your story, sorry for the late reply!
I must say that I’m impressed!
The directing was amazing - walking to spots, zooms, speech balloons, customization, choices… I couldn’t notice any mistake! Wow
The plot is unusual bc I haven’t read anything similar on Episode, which is definitely another advantage!
Thank you for sharing and reading my story as well! I would be grateful for a short feedback on my story too. Was there anything I can improve? 
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