Hi Dear 
I know that your question wasn’t addressed to me directly but I decided to read your story anyway 
It’s honestly amazing and addictive! I wanted to read 3 chapters only but couldn’t stop reading 
So I’ve read 5 in total.
Advantages:
- great directing
- awesome plot
- customization on point
Small mistakes/disadvantages:
None!
Proof:
If you decide to read my story as well, please let me know what you think!