meeeee 
I will keep reading it I was just ahhhh lol
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hahaha i understand completley
Omg i was reading your story when we did r4r and i got that right 
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bahahaha i’m proud 
also, side note, if you enjoyed it i just released episode 4! you should totally check it out! 
I’ve read them all!!!
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Lol, I got the second one I guess the whole pale thing through me off. I love it.
When do you think 5 will be out?
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I will finish anyone that has commented on here when they send me feedback and screenshots but I’m not taking any more new ones right now. Sorry. 
I am not here to do to do R4R, but I will say this @Helmion and @Bethany1 yall are amazing. just saying. I hope I made your night 
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Thank you, hun, means a lot to me. Your amazing also.
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You made me night like u said <3 you’re very special and amazing girl, have a good night 
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Hey I’m done with you story!
I LOVE SETH A LOT, my heart melts for him 
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You also have some errors that I will talk about later for u to improve 
First of all here is proof I’ve done my part
Girl u need to keep me updated because this story is my new drug
errors I notice in the story
Some spelling errors.
You should replace “year” for “yard”
replace " decora" for" decorate"
replace “hart” for “heart”
Replace “fist” for “first”
Good use of overlays.
I love the overlays you used for this story, they’re well placed, also the characters are place good and I don’t have any problem with that. 
Art scenes.
Beautiful art scenes, made me connect to the characters even more. Good job with those arts. 
I will definitely keep reading your story.
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Thank you so much hun I just woke up to take dog out so I’m going back to sleep, I will read yours as soon as I’m back up its only 444am here lol. But I’m so glad you like the story and thank you for showing me the few errors I will fox them later today
I’m starting yours now.