I finished!
I like how complex this magical world is, many creatures and interesting things in plot. I know it’s process but I’m impatient ass so I’d like to know more about Mr Bad 
aka Kian as I named him. Oh and I really like details and special effects with magic.
One word from me: pay attention to speech bubbles - sometimes are off and you can use “walks to spot” instead of exit left/right because characters are growing in scene when they exit. 
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