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Hii… I would love to do r4r with everyone :))
You can write your story name with link and description. I will read them (any style) and will continue if I really like them. I will send you ss with feedback once I will read 3 chapters or 2 (You will have to do the same FIRST)

Story - Ghost of Mona
Description - Jenny thought that she was a normal girl but one night she found out that she could…
Genre - Mystery
Style - Ink
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5459494207553536

Waiting - @Eclipsa :heavy_check_mark:
@JannahJackson :heavy_check_mark:
@Miss.Moonlight :heavy_check_mark:
@Steph5 :heavy_check_mark:
@epi.lynne444 :heavy_check_mark:
@Rain.drop
@Hijiko :heavy_check_mark:

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Heya i’m down :slight_smile:

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I’ll let you know when i’m done hope you like it

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How many chapters would like me to read?

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3 if you have time. But you can read as many as you want just be sure to send me an ss please ty :slight_smile:

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Yeah I am gonna send ss :))

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My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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Hey!!! i’m in!

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Here goes my story, I hope you like it!:kissing_heart:

Title: Just a one night stand?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4779603852394496

Description: In a life full of meaningless one night stands, who would have said your love story would start with one too? Love, Drama, Hidden secrets… You name it!

Genre: Romance

Type: INK

Length: 35 Episodes, Fully released.

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My story is called “Just a one night stand?” And it follows Adriana’s life in a not so normal love story with a sexy, popular, f*ckboy named Tristan by her side.

They meet each other in the most ordinary way possible: By having a meaningless one night stand. (taking into consideration their lifestyles)

Fate ends up bringing them back together, when the next day, Adriana is shocked when finding him standing in her livingroom with the news that he’s about to move in with her. At first they are not very fond of each other, but that “hate” ends up developing into a beautiful friendship and eventually into something more.

This story takes lot’s of dramatic turns like pregnancy, heartbreaks, secrets, lost friendships, lies, troubled pasts, new romances ETC.

It’ll mean the world to me if you could go check it out.

Thanks and wish you all the best of luck! :heart:

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I will read it :))

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I will check it out :))

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Thankss! I’ll check your story out as soon as I can and I’ll send you some screenshots. :upside_down_face:

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Hey, i’d love to do r4r!
Story: The perfect crime
Genre: Mystery
Author: Steph
Description: The perfect crime does not exist… RIGHT?!
Find the clues, solve the case, and find the killer … before he kills YOU!
choices matter in this story!
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link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6444735233327104

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I have already done r4r with you :))

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Hey there! I’m down for a r4r. I’d like you to read 2 chapters and I will do the same. My story is called The Dangerous Fight. Here’s the link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5702242260877312

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I’ve finished reading my part!

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For the feedback, I noticed in the beginning that the looping background really didn’t go as you planned it because firstly it was looping the wrong way and when they would stand still it would still be looping. And I noticed that with almost every scene the characters would pop up out of nowhere (for example the police investigation scene) they would pop up one by one which is pretty unrealistic and their were a few errors with the layers. And for the first scene where Mona is a ghost, the sizing compared to the girls character is pretty unrealistic. And I thought that the length of chapter 2 was a little bit weird and cut off short. But keep on going with the good stuff! Oh and don’t forget to put a period after each sentence!

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Thank you for your feedback :))

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No problem😊are you gonna start my story soon?

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I’ll do read for read.

Title: Kill me, Heal me.
Author: Rain
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 3 (more coming soon)
Description: In the world of ultra-rich, Aria encounters Leo Anderson who is spoiled, arrogant and a bully who turns her life upside down. But she’s falling for his best friend-- Jason Stone.

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INSTAGRAM: @rain.drop__episode

Link to my story is below!

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Sure :))

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Your story is not available…