R4r with honest feedback

[Maya6]

Send me screenshots of at least 3 chapters of my story The Star Necklace and I’m willing to give honest feedback and tips to improve your story!!!

I can help with ideas if you want also!!!

My story The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6248660515487744

Waiting list :

AW: underground by @Mace done

Vengeance by @lauraepi waiting for ss to start

AW: Imprinted by @Mellisa2731 done

[Mace]

I would love it if you could review my story!
Mostly to see if the reader is understanding what’s going on in the plot, if you know what I mean?
And I’ll read yours too, I like the premise

title: AW: UNDERGROUND
Description: Luna has been living in a underground bunker her entire life. When she finally escapes, she enters a whole new world. But trouble seems to follow her wherever she goes.

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: AW: UNDERGROUND

[Maya6]

Alright… send me ss that you’ve read 3 episodes of my story The Star Necklace and I’ll happily review your story

[lauraepi]

Hey I’d love to do r4r ! Here the info for my story, thanks so much for this thread!

Title, Vengeance

Author, Laura King

Description, After her fiancé was shot point blank Special Agent Bailey Lopez now finds herself a target as her fiancé’s killer is now after her. Will she escape or will Vengeance take over?

Genre, Action and Drama

Style, Ink

Chapters, 3 (on-going)

Instagram, laura_eps

Story link, http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5471622960316416

Cover

[Maya6]

Well…send me ss of three chapters of my story The Star Necklace then I’ll happily review your story

[lauraepi]

Yea already started.

[Mellisa2731]

Could you review my story?
Tittle:-AW:Imprinted
Cover:-

About:-In a world were Vampires and Werewolves are in an eternal war, But they have a mutual enemy, The witches. What happens when a wolf imprint’s on one?
Link:-http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6475926547529728

[Maya6]

Send me ss of three chapters of my story then I’ll happily review it

[Mellisa2731]

It was a good read!

[Maya6]

Thanks

[Mace]

[Maya6]

Thanks so much I’ll review yours ASAP today