R4R, With screenshots for emotional heartfelt stories

Hi guys, am writing a story I haven’t published it yet but it has 28 chapters and before I do I really want peoples ideas and things to help me with my story. I have done a fair share of R4R and every ones fedback is different and from each R4R I have improved my story.
I would like someone who Is not going to ghost on me and provide constructive fedback. And if there is something they don’t like tell me :slight_smile:
Thanks guys

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Hey loves❤️
My story is out…
Title: A cold bad heart
Author: Star girl
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance, Drama
Episodes: 7 (ongoing)
Description: She is broken… He is Baddie Player
what will happen when they cross their path with each other? C.C+ 2 love interest+ 1 LGBT option (coming soon)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5125605786451968


Instagram - @stargirl_episode for further updates :heart::heart: