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Kasey Martin, a shy, nerdy girl from the creepy, tiny Fallow Hills (pop. 579), discovers a portal to a different planet. Will she run away to Everworld from her lonely life and strict parents? If so, will she be able to stop what they’re planning to do to Earth?
Fallow Hills: Creepy, Weird, Small Population of 579 ppl

Kasey: Nerdy Girl, Strict Parents, Lonely goes to high with one friend

May or May not have a happy ending

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You should add more definition to the MC life and a little more about the portal she finds to give more edge to someone wanting to read your story

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Thanks

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No problem… Love to help

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I would write it like this:
“Kasey Martin, a shy, nerdy girl from the creepy, tiny Fallow Hills (pop. 579), discovers a portal to a different planet. Will she run away to Everworld from her lonely life and strict parents? If so, will she be able to stop what they’re planning to do to Earth?
May or may not have a happy ending.”

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I think that sounds really interesting. that kind of ”different world” thing is the reason I find it so interesting.

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Amazing, let me use that.

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Sure, if you want. ^^ I’m glad I could help. :slight_smile:

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