Hi again! Its the friendly fana fongoose.
OK anyway lmao, I’ve decided to change my story line to a dystopian thriller with a romance subplot, but I changed the dialogue and I just wanna know if this sounds good. It’s a bit short and I don’t really like it, but i’ll probably change it again oops. Any constructive criticism if welcome!
No matter what, we all have our demons.
Either it’s as small as an insect or as big as an tsunami.
Either they come and go or they stay there, taunting your mind.
And the worst part? You know that they’re there.
And for what? To feel useless?
To feel unlovable?
But, maybe we’ll never understand how we enjoy destroying ourselves.
But we will, sooner or later,
learn to fight them.
Even if it takes an eternity.