Hi love, just finished the first episode of Identical. Again the overlays, you guys are killing it! I love the use of them and it looks so good especially for what kind of story your doing!
Plot
LOVE the idea you have for your story. I’m so excited to see where it goes. I love how Vi has different opinions than her dad when it comes to AI and can’t wait to see how that affects the story.
Directing
Amazing. I however wish the story was a bit longer but I understand coding can take awhile.
Characters
Love Vi already. It’s only been one episode and she already seems to have so much depth. However when it comes to AI having free will, I agree with her dad. I also love how the dad has a reason to be extremely protective in your story. Mystery boy at the end intrigues me. I assume he’s going to the agent hired to protect Vi, and can’t wait to see more of him and his character.
Choices
I saw that empathy point and I can’t help but wonder how it’ll affect the story. Guess I’ll have to read and see. A good amount of choices for the length of the episode.
Grammar
I saw no issues in this category and appreciated the definitions you gave in the story.
Summary
You have a great mind, keep using it to make masterpieces x.