Hey I just read Love You To (it should be TOO 
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Plot
I like the idea of the story, not exactly sure how it’s Romance though. Maybe end on a cliffhanger if you can think of one that’d make the next episode more interesting to watch/read. The episode is also a bit short, its not too bad though.
Directing
The zooms are very questionable. Theres so much awkward space above the character and it bothers me. The speech bubbles need to be centered and flipped correctly. Spot directing is sometimes a bit off.
Characters
Love how Levi’s Character is, very realistic but I hope in future episode we get a closer look on how he got so depressed, angry and closed off to the world. I hope you make his depression and how he overcomes it a major part of the story. Just be careful not to offend anyone. Diamond and her husband seem very kind, I feel like her husband however, would tell Levi to give them respect because they’re helping him out. Levi might have a hard time with it but thats okay, he’ll grow and get better eventually.
Choices
Disappointed in the lack of choices, I suppose this is how you want the story to go. You could however use the point system and choose to be cold or kind which would either raise or lower Levi’s empathy which could be useful later on or effect his ending.
Grammar
First I noticed run on sentences. Then it was missing punctuation. After that misspelled words like due should’ve been do, set should’ve been spent and your should’ve been you’re. Before you post I recommend a proofreader to help you out.
Summary
You can really connect with people, incorporate that into your writing x.