Hi I just finished Blackbird!
Plot
Oh. My. Gosh. I’ve never read anything like this and I’m excited to see the plot unfold. The first episode is however very simple, kinda bland but certain points have intrigued me. The only thing making me want to read the next episode is honestly the end with the q&a/ character points. Understandable though, we don’t want to make it seemed rushed or shove all the exciting parts in the beginning.
Directing
Excellent job!
Characters
From what I see Chase is that guy who can’t STAND anyone who doesn’t obey the law. Or at least something like that, I hope we eventually explore his dark side or his flaws.
Choices
LOVE the use of timed choices, especially for an Action story. It’s always getting my blood pumping which is what you want for the reader. A huge amount of choices and I love that.
Grammar
I saw no issues.
Summary
You are a AMAZING coder, use that to your advantage x. You also deserve a ton more reads.