Hi I just finished reading Magicka: Witches Aren’t Real! PLEASE tell me when you release it I definitely want to read this story.
Plot
I love the whole idea with the story, and it was executed amazingly. The story feels far from rushed and started in a great place. You also managed to end on a cliffhanger, which is a plus. Can’t wait to read more!
Directing
Amazing job, it looks so professional.
Characters
I’m a whole different race from my parents. If you can’t code our skin color to be the same maybe clarify Aubrey was adopted. I love her dad and wish him the best. I feel so bad for her mom, it seems like they drained everything out of her. Aubrey seems so strong willed and I love that.
Choices
We had an okay amount of choices. Not sure if they impact the story, of course that isn’t mandatory though.
Grammar
I saw no issues!
Summary
This is so professional and clean, love that so much x.