Hey girly! I just finished reading Meet Me There. Love the intro btw, must’ve taken a lot of time.
Plot
So far the story is very chill, but in a fun way. Like when you just want a fun relaxing story to read, that’s the vibe I’m getting. I like the minigame and the roommate situation. Can’t wait to see you spice things up!
Directing
There are a few glitches, but they aren’t terrible. Love the way you use zooms.
Characters
Love the energy I’m getting from Esme. I also love her cultural background! You put a lot of thought into you characters, and I love it. Even the secondary ones have backgrounds and more to them!
Choices
Love the minigame and how it affects you later. Excited to see what the point system does and how the good/bad girl roommate affects your story. That was a very unique idea.
Grammar
Not sure if you meant prize or actually price at first during the minigame, other than that I saw no issues.
Summary
This story is so cute, keep it up x!