My name is Hannah and a few months ago, I had a story out called Mafia Star, but unfortunately, after only 12 chapters I was very disheartened and stopped writing it.
I have since changed the story slightly and re-written it in LL and before I continue carrying on with Chapter 2, I’d love to hear what you think.
Hey so I checked your first episode, I was a bit confused at the intro in the first episode, also you should check the characters heights, Antonio at first seemed to be short as a guy, sometimes the characters heights are a bit jumpy, like too tall or too short. Also there are zooming errors and missing letters in a few words too. Besides all of that everything was very great, you should definitely continue it .