Read 4 Read + Honest Feedback Lana Augustine 😽 OPEN

Good because it only has two chapter so far :joy_cat::joy_cat::joy_cat:

Ok, I’m writing my review for your story Ill be PMing you soon.

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You never gave me the name of your story either.

have you done read it <3 ?

Yeah I said I was writing my review for your story. Ill be PMing you as soon as I’m done.

Here my little feedback ! I wasn’t sure if I send it to the good thing where you can see it so I send it here too

Oh, you earn points for those each time you click the wrong one it takes point off until you click the right one. I also use them to convey feelings. This story is going to have tons of choices but I want the choice to build up slowly.

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Oops I was a little busy sorry
Title: The Bad boys from YOKAI clan
Autor: Ly
Style: ink

Ok Im going to start reading.

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I really like the theme and the plot, I feel like some of the scene are a little bit glitch, i don’t know if it glitch by my phone, lol. and also, I hate that Isssac guy.

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 4 bc ch 1 is customization
Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror
Style: Limelight
Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

Ok You have one person in front of you. But as soon as I write their review Ill read your story.

Reading yours now

Sending your review in a few! Sorry it took so long.

BUMPING! Bumping Bumping!