Read 4 Read: Need Feedback!


#1

Hi, guys! So, I just posted my story called Sharing the Gospel today. I know there are a small percentage of stories on Episode that don’t focus on God, so I decided to write one myself.
So here’s a little description of my story.

Story Title: Sharing the Gospel
Genre: Drama
Author: Leslie Loo
Description: Shy Tressa decides to come out of her shell and share the Gospel to the world.
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5142743785013248

Please share your stories down below and I will take a look at them as well.

Note: Sorry if this looks sloppy. This is my first time doing a read 4 read type of thing. lol


#2

I’m up for a r4r
Title:The Heart Won’t Let Up
Author:Aquarius-kiss
Genre:Romance
Style:Ink
Episodes:6 (ongoing)
Description:Heavenly has been let down her whole life and although she would love to give and receive love, her heart just won’t let up. Will Ace change that or will it all crumble before them?
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6521658929840128


#3

Hi! I’d love to read for read! I’ll read your story as soon as I could and send feedback, screenshots. :blush:
My story:
Title: Unexpected Love
Author: Victoria_Smith
Genre: Romance
Number of Episodes: 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Description: Victoria disappointed in love and she completely changed. Is she find love again or she share a bed with strangers?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5217681196580864
Insta: @victoria_smith_episode


#4

Hey there! Your story sounds interesting and I’d love to do a read for read with you :slight_smile:

Title: Everything You Are
Author: Julia E
Episodes: 3
Style : INK
Genre: Romance (with a mix of Comedy and Drama)
Summary: In a world full of overused high school romance plots, the story of a girl falling for someone she knew would never feel the same way she does fights her way to prove it’s possible

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5835142413549568

I swear it’s worth a read and definitely not cliche! :wink:

I look forward speaking to you. My Instagram is @juliae.writes


#5

So, Victoria.

It’s a good story. But, I feel that when the MC talks to herself, you should use narration bubbles instead of speech bubbles. But, other than that, it’s pretty good!


#6

Hey I would be okay with doing a read for read with you :slight_smile: I’ll send you a message after I’m done with your story
Here’s my story link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5578521367412736 5
My story is called “Trouble In Princess Paradise”
Princess Rose, always had everything she’s desired.What happens when the Solar Eclipse happens and strange things begin occuring?Will Rose be able to keep the 4 kingdoms together?
My instagram is : rosina.episode


#7

I like your story, I like the love interest, and I like the cliffhanger at the end. This is really good! Good job!


#8

I like the fact that in the beginning the main character says that it’s not your typical high school story. And I also love that it’s a comedy which is one of my favorite genres. I seriously enjoyed this story and I hope you write more in the future.


#9

I enjoyed your story as well. I don’t usually read princess stories but this one is by far one of my favorites.


#10

I’ve read your story and I loved it. I left you fanmail.


#11

Hey! I’d love to do a R4R :blush:

Title: Mad Love
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Author: Akanksha S.
Style: Ink
Episodes: 9 (ongoing)
Description: One day, you wake up and your mom is gone. Will you be able to find her in time and also true love along the way?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4736906335879168

Thanks :heart:


#13

Hi, my name is Dani!
Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story with action, adventure, mystery and, of course, romance!
This is not a cliche vampire story!
Episodes: 8 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5439290271858688
Instagram: daniepisodewriter
I hope you like it :black_heart:


#14

Hi!

It’s a good story and it made me laugh a few times. Good job!


#15

Your story is good, and even though I don’t like vampire stories, I still enjoyed your story.


#16

Thanks! I’m glad you liked it! :blush:
I’m going to start reading your story as soon as possible!


#17

Thank you so much for taking the time to read! I’m glad you liked it :slight_smile:


#18

Hey everyone!
I’d like to read 4 read my story called Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling here.
Below you can find the information you need to try it out.

Author: Mona K
Story Title: Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Comedy
Description: Cathyln is constantly picked on by her peers. Boys make fun of her and her “friends” make her do errands for them. Revenge her peers, betrayers and what if guy changes or not?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4830482803589120
Instagram: @monak.episode

Please make sure to follow me on Instagram to contact me or for sneak peeks of the story!
I’m up for read for reads as well, contact me on Instagram for that, please! :slight_smile: :two_hearts:


#19

Story Name: Simple to Chaos
Description: Two Best friends take a turn for the worst when a school shoot-out happens and they’re the names a gang member is calling for.

Genre: Action/Adventure
Sub-Genres: Mystery, Thriller, Drama, Romance
Some tags: CC, Choices, LGBTQ+, Trailblazer, Cliche-Breaker,

Instagram : @lee.lee_26
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6065730015199232

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#20

HEY!!:grin:

HERE’S THE INFO!!

Story Name: DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

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#21

Hey there!
Title: Cinder
Author name: Milena
Genre: Action
Description: Humans and androids crowd the raucous streets of New Beijing. A deadly plague ravages the population. From space, a ruthless lunar people watch, waiting to make their move. No one knows that Earth’s fate hinges on one girl.
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4959887487795200