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Hi there I need your feedback guys I want to correct my mistakes it’s my first story so I want to improve my skills

Cover by @coconvt (forum)/ @coco.ep (instagram):

Story: Miss unlucky
Description: Limelight style
An unlucky girl, when it comes to love back in high school. Now she’s in the university will she find true love or not?
Episodes:9 so far
Authur/Instagram: Hasna_writes
Genre: Romance

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Thank you lovey for your feedback
I just send the screen shoot by mp :blush:

Hey, just finished reading.
I really enjoyed it a lot!
It’s so exciting! Please keep it up!

I just finished! It is a really nice story, well written.
Only thing I have to say is that I would find it great if you could choose your own ball gown!

Hi! I would love to do a r4r :relaxed: Here’s my story.
TITLE: Our little secret

GENRE: Mystery/Drama

DESCRIPTION: What could be better than meeting five close friends at a student party? Such events are extremely rare. However, things don’t get so rosy when a dead girl is found in the house. Who is behind this and what is the little secret of each of them?

•Full CC

•One LI

•Sounds & Music

•Point System, Choices matter, Mini games

My ig: @epi.ksu

Ok thanks I’m glad that you liked it and I will do that

Title Ft: Not your perfect princess

Description: How does your life changes from that perfect fairy tale to the most frantic nightmare. Get ready for drama, suspense a slow-burn romance with 2 sexy beings. (NO GEMS)(CHOOSEGENDER)


Story looks good but I cant

Title: Destined to be

Style: INK

A girl with many secrets-
Celia starts a new life in New York, Manhattan, but trouble seems to always follow her around. Will she ever live the life she desires?
*1 LI *


hey again! :smile:
I just finished reading your story :blob_hearts: i really enjoyed the story-line :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:


Hi Popplita, your story sounds interesting! Would you like to do a 3x3 R4R? :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Style: Limelight
Link to story:

Description: Talking animals, ghostly ships, and murderous love triangles. Read all this and more in the Old French fairytales of Marie de France! (CC, Diversity, multiple endings)

Hi, I would love to do a R4R!
I hope you like it!
Also I would appreciate a feedback! (not necessary of course)
Title- My Sins
Author ig- @sophia_epiisode
Description- He is hot, unforgiving, dangerous while u are the queen bee of a college who just managed to get ur heartbroken…running into a sexy encounter with him opens doors for u (CC, LL)