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Hi there I need your feedback guys I want to correct my mistakes it’s my first story so I want to improve my skills

Cover by @coconvt (forum)/ @coco.ep (instagram):

Story: Miss unlucky
Description: Limelight style
An unlucky girl, when it comes to love back in high school. Now she’s in the university will she find true love or not?
MORE EPISODES COMING SOON STAY TUNED …
Episodes:9 so far
Authur/Instagram: Hasna_writes
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5761850766196736
Genre: Romance

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Thank you lovey for your feedback
I just send the screen shoot by mp :blush:

@Anna.writer
Hey, just finished reading.
I really enjoyed it a lot!
It’s so exciting! Please keep it up!

@Meghan2
I just finished! It is a really nice story, well written.
Only thing I have to say is that I would find it great if you could choose your own ball gown!

Hi! I would love to do a r4r :relaxed: Here’s my story.
TITLE: Our little secret

GENRE: Mystery/Drama

DESCRIPTION: What could be better than meeting five close friends at a student party? Such events are extremely rare. However, things don’t get so rosy when a dead girl is found in the house. Who is behind this and what is the little secret of each of them?

•Full CC

•One LI

•Sounds & Music

•Point System, Choices matter, Mini games

My ig: @epi.ksu


Ok thanks I’m glad that you liked it and I will do that

Title Ft: Not your perfect princess

Description: How does your life changes from that perfect fairy tale to the most frantic nightmare. Get ready for drama, suspense a slow-burn romance with 2 sexy beings. (NO GEMS)(CHOOSEGENDER)

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Story looks good but I cant

Title: Destined to be

Style: INK

DESCRIPTION:
A girl with many secrets-
Celia starts a new life in New York, Manhattan, but trouble seems to always follow her around. Will she ever live the life she desires?
*1 LI *

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6248614978060288

hey again! :smile:
I just finished reading your story :blob_hearts: i really enjoyed the story-line :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Hi Popplita, your story sounds interesting! Would you like to do a 3x3 R4R? :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title: FT: THE LAIS OF MARIE DE FRANCE
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Style: Limelight
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4740710001737728

Description: Talking animals, ghostly ships, and murderous love triangles. Read all this and more in the Old French fairytales of Marie de France! (CC, Diversity, multiple endings)

Hi, I would love to do a R4R!
I hope you like it!
Also I would appreciate a feedback! (not necessary of course)
Title- My Sins
Author ig- @sophia_epiisode
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4833391129329664
Description- He is hot, unforgiving, dangerous while u are the queen bee of a college who just managed to get ur heartbroken…running into a sexy encounter with him opens doors for u (CC, LL)