Hi, I would love if you read my story, I’ll read yours as well.
Title- My best friend next door
Description- What happens when someone from your past moves in next door? Will you fall for them? Follow Maya on her journey through senior year and see her find love where she least expects it
Okay! I’ll read an episode of each and leave a fanmail review for both.
Okay thank you
I left an honest fan-mail review for both.
To be honest, your story line is interesting, but your dialogue/conversation between characters really needs some work if you’re going to make it as a successful author. Try reading other published stories like Haute as Hell and Love and War for some ideas on how to use dialogue well during romance stories. I hope I’m not being too harsh, but I just think you need to work on that aspect of your stories before you’ll make it to the top.
Okay I probably need some help with that
Well, like I said, read some other stories for inspiration
Okay I am but like what punctuation do you mean do you mean like question marks and exclamation point
Okay, I am. But like, what punctuation do you mean? Do you mean like question marks and exclamation points?
Oh like that. Now I got it, thank you.
Hi! Sorry, I’m a little confused. Was that review for the both of us?
No it was for me
Hey @Chay I would love a R4R!
Here is some info about my story:
Title: The Nation D: Moon Eyes
Author: P Marroquín
Number of episodes: 6 (ongoing)
Description: Heather is trapped in a place were she can’t go out, but what happens when her best friend and his dead sister offer her a way to get out of there and start a brand new life…! Where’s your new destination? And what dark secrets does it hide? Will you finally find answers to your past?
I will be reading yours later today or tomorrow where I am…