Title: Damaged Desires
Author: Melanie
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Story Description: Ypur childhood friend turns into your lover but than he moves away and is now the leader of the mafia. What happens when he comes back for you? Will their be love? Or heartbreak?
Episodes released: 14
Link: Http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6616836802215936
Read 4 read: yes
Review for review: no
Title: Serendipity
Author: krissy_k
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Story Description: You fell from heaven and your stuck on Earth. What will you do now. How will you face the dangers to come.
Episodes Released: 3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5307481307348992
Read for read: yes
Review for review: yes
Where to reply: On here is fine
@melanie.writes @krystianh I will get onto your stories after @episode.anisha’s so please be patient. In the meantime, PM me my review and leave me fanmail please. 
@episode.anisha @krystianh Sent you your review, please send me mine. 
@melanie.writes Sent you a review because I forgot you just wanted a read for read. Let me know once you’ve read my story and feel free to send a review of my story.
Title(s): H & V: Alter
Author Name: Kingsley
Genre(s): action, comedy, romance
Style: Limelight AND Ink, but currently only the LL is published
Story Description: Balancing college and being a superhero is hard enough, but what about when your roommate is your arch-nemesis?
Episodes Released: 3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5919017669361664
Read 4 Read (yes/no?): yes
Review 4 Review (yes/no?: yes
Where you want to receive your feedback: on here
Would you like me to review something specific (and what?): Just overall plot- is it original enough or has it been done before, is it interesting and entertaining, etc
@Kingsley Here is your review-
First is all, I loved the cover and the splashes. They’re so cool!
Custimziation
I restarted the story and chose both and it worked but still check it out for the male option.There is a serious customisation and directing error:
I loved the split of the running and graduation ceremony. The directing was so good.
I chose for the MC to have short curly ombré hair so it was a bit weird when she turned up with long straight hair.
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Why does it say her name is Wyatt? I thought her name was Ember Moon as the superhero and the readers chosen name.
You need to position on this line because after I continue she lays down, you just need to do it earlier.
Your story was good. I loved the comedy.
PM me my review and leave me fanmail, as I did to you. 
Thank you so much! It was super helpful to have another set of eyes- I’ve been trying to code the customization scene for so long that at this point I think I’m completely oblivious to all of the mistakes lol. I think I corrected all of the errors, so I’m about to start reading yours!
No problem. Thanks!
Title: H & V: Kaleidoscopic
Author Name: The Turtle Trainer
Genre(s): Action, Romance
Style: Ink
Story Description: There are two sides to every story. Heroes and Villains, but what happens when you try to switch sides in the middle of the war?
Episodes Released: 3
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5318703894102016
Read 4 Read (yes/no?): Yes
Review 4 Review (yes/no?: Yes
Where you want to receive your feedback: As a reply.
Would you like me to review something specific (and what?): If the first episode is understandable or not.
Just published my new story ‘Hiding the Truth’ by @ab.creates.
Description- Scarlett struggles with depression due to her horrendeous childhood, but puts on a brave face. Will her new roommate Bailey, & best friend Didi be able to break her walls?
I would love it if people would check it out and give me some feedback!
@TheTurtleTrainer @ab.creates Will get onto your stories as soon as possible. In the meantime, review and leave me fanmail please.
Thanks,
Winter xx
Hi! This is my first story! Would love to be a aprt of your r4r
Title: Beautiful Boy
Short Description: It is about a girl who is forced to switch places with her brother at a summer camp after an accident. She faces falling in love, being blackmailed, under attack, and hiding her secret identity.
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance, Drama
Episodes: 5 - trying to do weekly episodes
Instagram: @kayluss
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6543833674940416
@Kayluss Yours will be reviewed after the others, please be patient. In the meantime, review and leave me fanmail please.
Thanks,
Winter xx
Story Title: Dark and Dangerous
Author: Carly Hannah
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: After Kylie leaves her abusive ex-boyfriend, what happens when her path crosses the cold-hearted, ruthless, hot gang leader, Jackson Cooper?
There are currently 3 episodes released.
Link:
Read for read: YES!
Dm me on Instagram, @carlyhannah_episode
Story Name: Cursed
Description: You are Zara. A vampire princess cursed at birth. You thirst for vampire blood. You have enemies who want you dead. You are the hero of your country. Will you be able to save it?
Genre: Fantasy, Drama, Romance
Style: Limelight
Read for Read
Review the quality of story line for me please
You can contact me at erugodebs@gmail.com
@TheTurtleTrainer Here is your review of the first episode of your H&V story~
I loved this splash. It was really cool.
Maybe use more talking animations when they’re talking or it looks weird.
This scene was really cool. How did you do it?
This bit wasn’t directed right.
The storyline and overlays were really good! Most of the directing was too.
PM me my review and leave me fanmail please, as I did to you.
Left my review in your fanmail, your story is really good! I’m excited for next episodes! Thank you for your kind words, by the way that gun scene was a custom background.
@Kayluss Here is your review of the first episode of ‘Beautiful Boy’.
It was done in mobile creation so it wasn’t as good as lots of the stories I read but it does have a good story plot.
At the end of this scene, they exit opposite ways when they’re meant to go the same way so that was a bit odd.
I think you meant “we’re inseparable.”
In that same scene is when they get run over but that bit was very confusing and I didn’t understand what was going on to be honest.
This is odd. I know you can’t lay her down but maybe sit her on the edge of the bed instead.
I think you mean “You blacked out for a bit…”
Why is he sitting weirdly, with no talking animation while I’m guessing he’s screaming?
The nurse looks giant compared to everybody else. Not bad just letting you know.
You should have her talking while she’s on the phone.
This was as confusing as the running over scene as she wasn’t on the floor.
Again, they exited opposite ways to go to the same place.
I think you mean “in her eyes…”
She’s standing in an odd place and moved from the position she was standing in before to there, just to change her clothes which was a bit weird.
Overall, the directing wasn’t great but the story plot was unique as I’ve never heard of that plot line before.
PM me my review and leave me fanmail, as I did to you.
Thanks,
Winter xx
