Cool, no problem. Thanks.
What’s a custom background? Isn’t that where somebody makes it? If so, who or how? 
I’ve made it myself in Photoshop. I’ve put a room layer first then, a picture of the guard, and a gun then MC’s arms. I recommend watching tutorials about Photoshop, it’ll be really helpful.
Thanks. I don’t have photoshop, bummer but oh well. 
I’ll just have to do without.
Thanks, I’ll try it out. 
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I don’t know whether you wanted a review but I thought I’d give you one anyways. The only issue I found was a grammatical mistake:
• You wrote ‘the The…’ which didn’t make sense.
Apart from that, the directing and storyline is good, even though the episode was quite short. I didn’t mind the length.
I left fanmail, so please do the same for me. PM me my review. ;£
Here’s your review of the first episode of ‘Cursed’~
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First of all, the title is laid out wrong.
It should be laid out like this: H&V: Cursed.
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The layering is wrong. Nia should be behind the guy.
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Remember to always put punctuation, such as full stops, at the end of your sentences.
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I think you mean ‘there was a…’ Correct me if I’m wrong.
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It should be:
‘My Lord, the Queen, her water broke.” At the same time Nia is still reading her piece of paper in the back - maybe make her go back to idle when he comes in.
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In this scene, the characters popped up weirdly.
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It should be: ‘Your Majesty, the Queen, she is in labour at the moment.’
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This isn’t your fault but the hood looks a bit odd. Also full stop needed at the end.
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Should be a question mark at the end. You could do it like this:
‘Who are you?!’
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Should be ‘It can’t be, they said they captured everyone.’
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Should be ‘What are you waiting for Gale? Let’s go!’
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The layering here is wrong.
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Zara isn’t talking when she says this. Shes finished her previous animation so it looks like nobody is speaking.
Overall I really liked the story. It was original and interesting.
PM me my review and leave me fanmail, as I did to you. 
Thanks,
Winter xx
hi there! i would love it if you could review my story!
Title(s): stuck in my screen
Author Name: writerRMT
Genre(s): drama | romance | comedy
Style: ink
Mobile or Online Creation: online/desktop
Story Description: one death. one girl. one click. one life changed forever. for better or for worse? you decide.
Episodes Released: i only want the first one reviewed, ty
Link: this is my linktree link, the link to my story is also there! https://linktr.ee/writerrmt
Read 4 Read (yes/no?): yes please!
Review 4 Review (yes/no?: absolutely!
Where you want to receive your feedback: i dont mind, whatever is easiest for you
Would you like me to review something specific (and what?) no, just a general review is fine!
thank you so so much! xxx
@rmtwrites Here is your review of the first episode of ‘Stuck in my screen’:
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The reader message needs a capital message at the beginning. I’m guessing it was wrote like that on purpose?
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You can’t see the proper shape of her mouth, her eyebrows or eyes.
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He’s meant to be kissing her but he stops for two narration boxes. I don’t know if you meant for it to be like that.
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The sentence needs a capital letter and full stop, also friend is spelt wrong but I’m guessing you want it like that.
Overall, your story plot is unique and interesting.
PM me my review and leave me fanmail, as I did to you.
tysm! haha hello darkness my old frend is a vine loool i meant to spell it that way
thank you so much for your review!
Happy to help! When will you be able to do mine? 
i can do it right now!
Thanks. PM it to me when you’re done!
Thank you, yeah I couldn’t direct it that good in the mobile creation lol but the rest of my episodes I did it on the computer, going to look at your story now
Thanks.
Once I’ve reviewed your stories, I may post them on my new Instagram page (@winter05.episode) if you leave your Instagram here. I’ll post yours if you tag me in your post of mine!
The reply i gave you for the fanmail you gave me is your feedback <3 can’t wait to read more.
Thanks.