Read 4 read? Story feed back

Hey I’m looking for feed back on my story that I’m writing.! I have published 4 episodes and am in the process of working on more. I’ll read your story as well. Mine is call “Twisted Perfection” (Shadows from the past)

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I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
I published this a few days ago, so it only has 3 episodes.

Please be honest! Thank you!

Can you post cover please? Just so I know I find the right one?
Title:Alone Till There Was You

Here it is and I will read your story.

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I will be honest. I’m a writer so I’ll be 100% honest going to check it out.!!

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How many episodes will you be reading? I’m gonna read 3 of yours!:sparkling_heart:


Name: The Ember Moon Pack


Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.
Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight


Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:


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trying to read your story and getting this message

Oh. Maybe you could try again later.

I started chapter one when they were moving in I’ll try again in a few mins.

I will do a read for read with you :slight_smile:

Story: Autumn Falls.
Author: Luna.


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Ok perfect.!!

Please read this and then I will read yours.
Your life was normal until you met two bad boys who both like you. People go missing, you get anonymous texts, family and boy drama and so much more. Customization available.

I’m just getting home… I’m starting yours now.!! Please give me your honest feedback on mine and what you feel I should improve.!! Thank you.!

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Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first : For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 12 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link :


it’s been stuck on this screen for 10 mins I’m going to close the app and reopen

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Nevermind I got it lol

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