Hey @TheLynxx I’m interested in doing a Read 4 Read. I read 3 chapters of your story.
Well done, you’ve done well with the directing. I’ve spotted a few grammatical errors, so proof read that. Great music choices, my suggestion is to add a sound warning at the beginning of your story so readers are aware that sound is being used (Some people have their phone on silent so they don’t know).
Also, one of the screenshots I have provided above, the girl in the red dress is floating in the air on the board.
This is my story details:
(WATCH NEW STORY TRAILER): [LINK TO TRAILER]
Title: Loving You Again
Author: Fluffy Rice
Chapters: 9 (Ongoing)
Description: Childhood friends reunited after 10 years. Sierra and Peter reunite after an unexpected meeting. How can they mend their friendship to account for the missing years they were apart?
This story is based on a true story, my life actually.