Hi, here’s how this works:
You read 3 episodes of my story, then I’ll read 3 episodes of your story and review it.
I review on:
Directing is my piece of cake. I love it as I do it obsessively. If I see mistakes in your story (if there are any) I will contact you and help you fix them. (Don’t hesitate to ask me question about directing through my PMs!)
If a story can’t enter the main subject in the at least end of first episode, the pace is a little bit slow for me. However if you want your story to not get judged by that, just tell me. Because it’s an personal like. Not a requirement.
I’m a human-being(?) that enjoys realism in her stories. If a dialogue is too out of world, (and by that I mean too unrealistic) realism was never bothered to be put in the story. How to add realism? I can PM you it. Just simply remember that we are humans and we are not lawfully good angels.
PM for a review, or drop your link here. Like I said, first you must read my story EXORCISM OF PHOEBE and send me screenshots, then I’ll read your story and post the review on my Instagram. Make sure to write your Instagram so I can tag you!
My story: Exorcism of Phoebe
I want you to focus on:
I read your story, screenshot has been sent to you.
This is my first story, directing should be excused.
English is not my main language.