Hello there fellow Authors!
I recently just got back into Episode and I’m always looking for new original story’s to read made by the community. I just finished my second story and it would be awesome if you guys checked it out.
So how about a trade! Yeah?
I’ll read yours if you read mine, Id like others to know that I’ve actually read their story so ill reply to your comment in this thread with a screen shot of my progress of your story. I’d like the same in return as well.
Please know that if you have a really long story 20+ episodes it’ll take me longer to finish those and give my full opinion on it
I’m looking forward to reading your stories and your feedback on mine, nothing is wrong with a good critique!
Title: The Game
Genre: Adventrue (little bit of romance)
Overview: You are transported into a new realm, in the most twisted way possable the natives look to rehabilitate their world. Conform, Die or Escape. How will this game end for you?
I’ll do a r4r! I’m all in.
Name: Tayle S.
Details: Switching with the worst person possible, how can you switch back? What will happen in each others bodies?
Description: “I didn’t switch minds, I didn’t switch genders, I switched bodies” - Anonymous
Chapters: 3 (on going)
Genre: Drama, mystery
CHOICES: It’s medium.
Awesome ill check it out soon
Hi, your story sounds interesting so I don’t mind a R4R haha. I’ll upload a screenshot and a review when I finished.
Genre: Fantasy, Action
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Thank you ill check yours out as well
Here you go.
You’ve stated that you don’t mind constructive criticism, so here is what I have to say:
- You have Character Customization which is a huge plus point for me, and I like how the cover looks.
- I liked the timed choices.
- I’ve noticed grammar errors like how you wrote ‘Im’ instead of ‘I’m’, and ’yogart’ instead of ‘yogurt’. Punctuation at the end of sentences is important as well.
- Chapter 1 is wayy too short lol. And so is chapter 2. Without CC, a chapter should be about 300 lines long.
That’s all, thank you for this thread and good luck with your story!
I really liked your story, tho I a bit confused on how they switched bodies in the first place.
I know they wished how the other two felt, but what was the factor that made that possable.
It also looked like chase had alot of scaling issues being tal than short than same height, just somthing I noticed.
Keep on writing im looking forward to see how you develop your story
Thanks for your input Vivi.
Grammar has never been my strong suit i cant tell you how many times i’ie proof read through the story to make sure everything looks cohesive lol, i will go back and look for those
tho normally if its just a statement I wont put periods it just looks weird to me if its anything else like a question or exclaiming than i will use appropriate grammar.
And yeah chapter one is really short but there was nothing else that needed to be said in that chapter. normally my chapters are about 800 lines except ch 4 which has a lot of customizing so there are like 6k lines
Thank you for the feedback and good luck on your story as well my thoughts about it are in the next comment
Hey! I would like to do R4R with you if you have some time to look at my story too.
Title of your Story: Fallen Angel
Author Name: AdyElly
Genre : Drama & Mystery
Chapters: 8 (ongoing)
Description: A fatal wedding day. A new identity. New challenges. Dark secrets of the past.
Will be able Mal to find her way out from an impending disaster?
Link To Story:
I really liked your story it seems like it might be one of those stories that has alot more to it than what you just see.
I can tell you really did take your time in planning everything out and especially the very full rooms haha. your splash screen really really nice i was kinda like oh wow!
Good luck with the rest im sure your story will be a hit.
Pic fir both you and tay
Thank you, I appreciate it!
Of course i will most defiantly take a look at it ill have to wait a bit for my tickets to refresh tho so i can go through all 8 episodes at once
Title: College Days: Behind Closed Doors
Story Description: College is all fun and games until you discover what’s behind closed doors. Students disappear one by one, and you’re going to get to the bottom of it.
ill read your story before tomorrow
R4R if you want?
Title: Ocean’s 5
Author: Lara P.
Chapters: 3 out (more coming soon)
Description: Five highly skilled and most dangerous people on Earth are brought together for the biggest heist ever seen. What can go wrong?
Are you still doing read for reads???
Yep i am just been busy with the holiday today haha, ill add you to my fav’s list
Here we go😊 R4R?
Genre: Romantic Comedy
Description: Jade has been humiliated by Max on her first day of college. She begins to grow hatred for him and decides to take revenge. What will happen to Jade?
Episodes: 9 (Ongoing)
Great! I’ll send you a screenshot to your messages when I’m done.
My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Story style: Secret Suprise
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
@MrsPadilla Hello ~ Do you want to do a R4R with me? I’m down! Let me know!
My story details~
(WATCH NEW STORY TRAILER): [LINK TO TRAILER]
Title: Loving You Again
Author: Fluffy Rice
Chapters: 11 (Ongoing)
Description: Childhood friends reunited after 10 years. Sierra and Peter reunite after an unexpected meeting. How can they mend their friendship to account for the missing years they were apart?
This story is based on a true story, my life actually.