Read for read and feedback!

Hey, there!
I made this new story on episode called Cinder :smiley:
Author: Milena
Name of the story: Cinder
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4959887487795200
Genre: Action
Description: Humans and androids crowd the harsh streets of New Beijing. A deadly plague destroys the population. From space, some cruel lunar people watch, waiting to make their move. No one knows that Earths’s fate hinges on one girl…
Inspiration: Marissa Meyer

Enjoy! :grin::grin:
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Hey there! I read your story and I loved the plot.
Still, there are some issues i saw:
-Sometimes speech bubbles appearbut characters don’t have the animation to talk, so they’re just freezed.
-I think you should add more animations, because if the characters are just standing there while doing nothing, looks kinda weird.
-There are some spelling mistakes
-When you place characters, sometimes one is above the other. Also, the characters sometimes jus disappear and then walk in again.

Still, I liked your characters and how different they are from each other
Great job!!

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My story is called It’s About Time by CJRivers
Genre: Thriller, Comedy
Cover: IBT%20Official%20Cover%20Photo!
Instagram @CJRiversepsiode
Episode Account @CJRivers

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OK! Thanks. I really appreciate it :grin:

Hey! I love your story!

  1. I love the beginning when " I spend way too much time playing episode…" I can relate to that :joy:

  2. I usually don’t like limelight that much but you made a point

  3. " internet never lies" :rofl:

  4. Your story has a lot of potential. Its funny and I loved the plot.

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Don’t forget to read mine :kissing_heart:


i will happily do a read for read :slight_smile:

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What’s your story called again?
And do you have instagram?

Yes I do, it’s milena_rebecca and my story is called Cinder

Hey there!
I did read your story…

  • I wonder if Sierra will start liking Peter?

  • Lol, I feel bad for Sierra friend, maybe he was just joking

  • I don’t really like Comedy episodes but whoa the first chapter was funny

Keep up the good work!
You’re story has a lot of potential. I would wright more episodes.
PS: I hope that Kristine get’s better soon!

Don’t forget to read my story and send me some feedback, you can fan mail me if you want. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Hey there!
I loved your story…

  • I liked the plot of the story where Casey acciently bumps into Eleni and they I think fall in love.

  • When Casey gets kidnapped he just stood there with no animation. You should make him look sad or angry or scared…

  • You have very good directing skills

  • Sometimes speech bubbles appear but characters don’t have the animation to talk, so they just freeze.

  • There are a few spelling mistakes

I like the plot and how the characters are different from each other.
Don’t forget to read mine :heart_eyes:

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Hey! I`d love to do r4r!!
Story title: Let the demon inside
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Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504

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Thank you :slight_smile: yours is next on my list to read al let you no when am done :slight_smile:

Okay, thanks :grinning:

We could do a read for read if you want :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :slight_smile:

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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_Hey there! _
I read your story…

  • At the beginning when Kole and Din appeared Rosie just froze maybe you should remove her or just add an animation.

  • I think that your direction skills are good.

  • Lol, I think that Kole really cares about Din because he started to cry when he lost Din in his room on chapter 1

  • I liked your characters and how different they are from each other.

Good job!! Keep up the good work! :grin:

I’m about to read the stories posted here (I was looking for good new ones for some time now) :smiley:

This is my first story! English is not my first language. I really appreciate feedback!

Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
GENRE: Romance
Style: ink

Link:

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I really liked your story.

  • I really like a story where you can customize your own character.

  • Where did you get those outfits?? I’ve been searching for those for a while now.

  • I loved the plot!

  • Your story has a lot of potential. I can’t find something that’s wrong in your story.

  • Maybe you should add some sound affects>

I loved your story. It’s great! Keep up the good work.

Hey ! Thank you so much for you feedback !
I’m trying my very best and it’s my first story :blush:.

I’ve seen your story on my list I will give you a feedback when I’ve read your story :blush::blush::blush::blush:.

Xo.

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