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#1

Hey, there!
I made this new story on episode called Cinder :smiley:
Author: Milena
Name of the story: Cinder
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4959887487795200
Genre: Action
Description: Humans and androids crowd the harsh streets of New Beijing. A deadly plague destroys the population. From space, some cruel lunar people watch, waiting to make their move. No one knows that Earths’s fate hinges on one girl…
Inspiration: Marissa Meyer

Enjoy! :grin::grin:
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#2

Hey there! I read your story and I loved the plot.
Still, there are some issues i saw:
-Sometimes speech bubbles appearbut characters don’t have the animation to talk, so they’re just freezed.
-I think you should add more animations, because if the characters are just standing there while doing nothing, looks kinda weird.
-There are some spelling mistakes
-When you place characters, sometimes one is above the other. Also, the characters sometimes jus disappear and then walk in again.

Still, I liked your characters and how different they are from each other
Great job!!


#3

My story is called It’s About Time by CJRivers
Genre: Thriller, Comedy
Cover:


Instagram @CJRiversepsiode
Episode Account @CJRivers


#4

OK! Thanks. I really appreciate it :grin:


#5

Hey! I love your story!

  1. I love the beginning when " I spend way too much time playing episode…" I can relate to that :joy:

  2. I usually don’t like limelight that much but you made a point

  3. " internet never lies" :rofl:

  4. Your story has a lot of potential. Its funny and I loved the plot.


#6

Don’t forget to read mine :kissing_heart:


#7

I’m down for a r4r!!

Author: Fluffy Rice
Genre: Romantic Comedy
Style: Limelight
Description: Childhood friends reunited after 10 years. Both Sierra and Peter are unaware that they knew each other from the past. (Remake)
Episodes: 4 (Ongoing)
Instagram: @fluffyrice.episode

LINK https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/4771951097544704

This story is actually based on my own experiences in real life. ALSO, the cover arts are still Pending for Review, so the picture at the moment is the default art of the guy stepping on a banana peel.

(PS. It’s not the “Loving You Again (Discontinued)” story, that’s my old one in INK. The difference between the old and the remake is that the remake has more and better plot lines, and better directing!)


#8


i will happily do a read for read :slight_smile:


#9

What’s your story called again?
And do you have instagram?


#10

Yes I do, it’s milena_rebecca and my story is called Cinder


#11

Hey there!
I did read your story…

  • I wonder if Sierra will start liking Peter?

  • Lol, I feel bad for Sierra friend, maybe he was just joking

  • I don’t really like Comedy episodes but whoa the first chapter was funny

Keep up the good work!
You’re story has a lot of potential. I would wright more episodes.
PS: I hope that Kristine get’s better soon!


#12

Don’t forget to read my story and send me some feedback, you can fan mail me if you want. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:


#13

Hey there!
I loved your story…

  • I liked the plot of the story where Casey acciently bumps into Eleni and they I think fall in love.

  • When Casey gets kidnapped he just stood there with no animation. You should make him look sad or angry or scared…

  • You have very good directing skills

  • Sometimes speech bubbles appear but characters don’t have the animation to talk, so they just freeze.

  • There are a few spelling mistakes

I like the plot and how the characters are different from each other.
Don’t forget to read mine :heart_eyes:


#14

Hey! I`d love to do r4r!!
Story title: Let the demon inside

Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504


#15

Thank you :slight_smile: yours is next on my list to read al let you no when am done :slight_smile:


#16

Okay, thanks :grinning:


#17

We could do a read for read if you want :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :slight_smile:

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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#18

_Hey there! _
I read your story…

  • At the beginning when Kole and Din appeared Rosie just froze maybe you should remove her or just add an animation.

  • I think that your direction skills are good.

  • Lol, I think that Kole really cares about Din because he started to cry when he lost Din in his room on chapter 1

  • I liked your characters and how different they are from each other.

Good job!! Keep up the good work! :grin:


#19

I’m about to read the stories posted here (I was looking for good new ones for some time now) :smiley:

This is my first story! English is not my first language. I really appreciate feedback!

Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
GENRE: Romance
Style: ink

Link:


#20

I really liked your story.

  • I really like a story where you can customize your own character.

  • Where did you get those outfits?? I’ve been searching for those for a while now.

  • I loved the plot!

  • Your story has a lot of potential. I can’t find something that’s wrong in your story.

  • Maybe you should add some sound affects>

I loved your story. It’s great! Keep up the good work.