Read for read (+ free review) “The Wanderer 2: Mischa”


#1

Hi, I’m looking to do a read for read, as I have lots of passes that need spending.
Here’s how I do it:

I will read your entire story to its current completedness. This is regardless how long your story is. If you are continuing it, I will read until it’s final completed chapter. If I like it, I may finish it once you have, but I will consider my requirement Fufilled.
I will send a screenshot from the final chapter as proof.
I will expect you to read the same number of chapters as I read of your story.
I will give a free review. It’s purely obligatory and I don’t expect one in return. If you don’t want one, please warn me in advance.
I will try to do it as first come, first serve, but please understand, if you have, say 20 chapters, I may read a shorter story first.
Please understand it is written in Australian English (similar to Canadian English) so please don’t message me saying how I’ve mispelled “colour” or ”cheque”, etc.
I look forward to reading your stories!

Title: The Wanterer 2: Mischa
Author: Aliceproductions
Genre: Comedy/Romance (more comedy)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5805808724344832
Episodes: 9 (Complete)
Instagram: Aliceproductions
Style: INK
Story Description: Taking up from where ‘The Wanderer’ left off, Corrine and Mischa have been dating for a year, but Mischa is unsure about their relationship and wants Corrine to go back to being Corey again. Then one day, she finds out why Corrine doesn’t want to. (Note if you haven’t read ‘The Wanderer’, never fear. There is a short recap in the first episode.)


#2

Hey, @AJ_PELZER
I would love to listen your thaughts and do r4r
Title: Choose?!!!
Author: @ya
Genra : adventure/Sci-Fi
Link:


Description:
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)


#3

Hi there. I read your story. It’s very good concept. I must say though it was marred by spelling errors and directing commanders. The characters seemed to slide, like they were on roller skates. Other times they seemed to be walking on air. Also for a story about choices, you did have to wait a while to make one.
That aside it was a good story and I did enjoy it. It’s a really clever and original idea. I’m so glad to see someone try something new for a change. I made a story myself about choices having different outcomes and I’ve been looking for others. It’s nice to have choices affect the outcome instead of merely slightly different dialogue of wearing different clothes. A job well done!


#4

Thanks , for nice words and I am glad you enjoyed it😉 I will look at the errors you mentioned , thanks ,
I will read yours tonight (lol,I am at college now😅)


#5

Hello :slight_smile:
For a guaranteed read for read
Kindly open the link, and fill out the form :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 8 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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#6

Thank you!
That’s ok, you focus on your studies. My story can wait, it’s not going anywhere!


#7

Ok, I found the filling out form time consuming. Usually I just go on the honesty basis. If they don’t read my story, nothing I can do about it. But if that’s how you do it, I concur.
My policy is to read the entire story regardless how long it is. In return, I expect them to read mine for equal amount of chapters. It’s a good deal, if they only have 3 chapters I’ll read theirs, but if they have 20, they only have to read my whole one which is 9 in this case while I will read all 20 of theirs.
However, you only are willing to read 3 as indicated in your form. Although I am committed to finishing everyone’s stories here, if you’re only going to give me 3 while you’re story is 8, if not going to read the last 5 chapters if you’re not going to read 8 of mine. I will therefore read only 3.


#8

I finished chapter 3 of your story. It’s quite good. Only thing is the zooms take quite long and are somewhat unnecessary. I like the idea of your story. The customisations are good.
For customisation, I noticed you can change the hair style but not colour. Was that intentional or did you forget? Some readers may not like that it has no choices, but it doesn’t bother me. I believe in writing your own story, not letting choices alter it.
Only thing is made my character snow white, not realising she was an interracial child (which I think is awesome. It’s nice to see a white guy with a black girl for once.) If I’d known that, I would have made her somewhat darker or left her as she was.
A very interesting story. Well done.


#9

Hey! I’d like to do a read for read with you :slight_smile:

Author: Tilly
Title: Recovery
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Chapters: 4 (ongoing)
Description: Follow Quinn as she recollects on her childhood and teenage years, packed with drama, romance and a battle with depression.

My instagram is @tillyepisode

I look forward to hearing from you :heart:


#10

hey :purple_heart:
You,Me And The Beat by Anna (me)
It has only 3 episodes/ ongoing :smile:
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#11

Hi, I read your story. I liked it, although I must admit I am getting a bit tired of the “abusive father, loving mother” cliche.
You story is very intriguing and sad. I certainly hope it isn’t based on real events. It’s very good and you definently feel for the lead character. I commend you for warning the reader on the content.
You don’t really need to explain the Britishisims in your story. Most countries are pretty privy to how you british people talk. My country uses “dinner” for what you call “tea” (I know you guys use that for afternoon meal) but we certainly know what tea means in Britain. Ditto primary school. 16 is age of consent in most western countries. I did notice that you use “math” instead of “maths” though. That’s certainly not what the British use.
As for the mental content, not being of mental health, it is hard to understand how the characters are feeling and how they should react. It’s a real issue in our society and I’m glad you are tackling it head on here. It’s nice to read stories that aren’t about bad boys, gangsters, royalty, pregnancy, etc for once.
I liked your story. I only wish more people would do more like this. Thank you for sharing. I’m glad I read it.


#12

Thank you for your honesty. I’ve had someone say they liked the reader notes to explain the British terms, so I suppose that’s each to their own. I think the math thing is me watching too much American stuff :stuck_out_tongue: Thank you again! I’m working more on explaining the characters feelings as I go on, but it’s a pretty heavy subject to write about and explain sometimes. I’m glad you enjoyed it :slight_smile:


#13

Hi, I read your story. It’s good, but I must say I don’t like the father very much. He seems to have an unhealthy interest in younger women.
It’s a good plot. I definently didn’t see that plot twist coming at the end.
From a technical point, your story is outstanding. All the overlays, different directing commands and many of what you’ve you’ve done in your story go far beyond the realm of advanced directing. There are many things you’ve done in your story that I would love to do in my ones. You’ve clearly put a lot of time and effort into this.
Only gripe is that your chapters are rather long. Would you consider editing them a bit into smaller chapters? Reading one felt like 1 was reading three at once.
Other than that, good job. You are a very gifted writer.


#14

Thank you very much for your feedback, I truly appreciate it.
For the hair color, it’s intentional. It’s part of the story that’s why. I will try my best to improve my story but it’s really nice of you.
I’ll give you a feedback when I’m done reading your story

Again thanks a lot :slight_smile:


#15

No worries, your story was very good.


#16

This is my first story so I would love some feedback! Thanks :heart:

Title- My Best Friend Next Door
Author- Marina
Chapter number - 8 (more soon)
Style- ink
Genre- Romance
Instagram- episode.mbfnd

Description- What happens when someone from your past moves in next door? Will you fall for them? Follow Maya on her journey through senior year and watch her find love where she least expects it.

Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5154152958525440


#17

Hey! Thank you for this thread :smile: I will go read your story now, can’t wait to know what you think about mine! xx

Title: Game Of Disguises
Author: Bonnie Dundee
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Chapters: 3
Brief Description: Two best friends have fun by disguising themselves as other people and attend luxurious and fancy events. What happens when they find themselves at the wrong place and in the wrong time?


#18

Hey, I read your story. I absolutely LOVE real stories with a passion. It’s pretty good for a first effort. There were a few glitches (people talking without moving their lips, sliding, people disappearing in a scene) but overall it was very well done and much better than my first effort was.
The backgrounds are interesting and the clothing choices are good. I was wondering, is your character of Serbian Origin? I had a friend in school who was and she was called Maya too (although it was spelled Maja). I’ve added her in my new story (although she’s called Marla to avoid naming her personally.)
If this story is 100 percent true, I’m so sorry about what happened to your parents. That Matt is a really unlikeable douche and I’m hoping Maya ditches him soon. A really good effort. Well done!


#19

I read your story and I liked it very much.
Even though you say English is not your first language, you did very well. I could only count one spelling mistake in your whole story. I like the fact that you put a gay man in there and are not afraid to show him kissing. It seems that gay guys are usually there to act feminine and be the ‘girl pal.’ Whole lesbians are always shown kissing and being intimate, very few stories show men doing anything romantic.
I’m wondering? What did the start of the story have to do with the rest of it? I have a theory, but I’m not sure if you are planning on revealing it later or we were supposed to guess on our own.
A job well done, can’t wait to see what happens next.


#20


I answered you on PMs :smiley: and here is a screenshot to prove you I read it :wink: