Read for Read& Give Me feedback

Here is my story link…I hope y’all can read it and give me feedback…and tips…http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6118705619599360 I will read y’all story’s :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Would you like general feedback, or in depth?

I’ll read it

General

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I’d love to do a r4r

Title: Oblivious
Genre: Comedy
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Episodes: 9 (on-going)
Description: When socially awkward Leanna catches the eye of equally awkward Kai things can’t get more awkward, can they?