Read for read? Looking for feedback on my story PLEASE :)

I’m still working on my story but I have almost two full chapters and I was looking for some feedback. If you could let me know what you like about my story, and what advice you have for me I would love to do the same in return.

Thank you! :smile:

Hello ok I’ll read your story and I have my story not finished yet need your feedback on it


Thank you :slight_smile:

Hey, I’m new here and I would love to have a feedback on my latest story.
Author Elison Daniels
Title Broken Lace
Style Ink
Genre Romance/Drama/Mystery
Episodes 3 (ongoing)
Description Grace has told what to do her whole life, but after she takes an internship with doctor Davis, her life will never be the same again…
Episode link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4891779506241536
Story cover

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: