Read for read or feedback! Supernatural/fantasy story

Read for read or criticism wanted!

Hey all!
New here, I just published my book and am willing to do a read for a read
Here’s mine.
It’s called Teen Slayer
It’s a fantasy/romance about a slayer/hunter who is a 17, new in town and falling for one of the Immortals. The first generation of vampires, who have more abilities and differences than any vampires we know and read about.

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