Hi, please am new here and Here is my story link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5935056191815680
I would actually love to hear your honest opinion about it thanks
I finished your story. I know it’s your first, so I’ll go easy on you.
Your story is good. The plot is interesting and it’s well written.
It could be improved though. Apart from some backgrounds, it look like it was done in mobile creation. Standard clothes, limited movements, etc. If you go into writers portal, I’m sure you could design some more interesting clothes and characters movements. It gets a little tiring seeing the same things over again.
But if you don’t want to, that’s fine, but let people know it was created by mobile creation.
Your story was interesting and it was a good read.
I’m working on it 
I know, I’m not rushing you.
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I’ve just started reading yours hun. I’ve followed you on Instagram too and sent you a message on there 
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Thank you! Got it. 
Hey guys! If you’re looking for a good romance/comedy/mystery to read with lots of surprising twists and turns, then you should check out my story Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane! It’s pretty good in my opinion and I’m sure you wont be disappointed!!
Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 3 (More to come!)
Style: Limelight
Create your own character!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Shortened Link: https://bit.ly/2FHhOMS
Thank you so much for reading!
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Hey! Are you willing to do a read for a read with me?
Here’s my story;
The Blood of Kane
Genre: Fantasy but it has also mystery, romance and drama in it.
Description: A mystery, full of the unknown and magical werewolf story! Discover the life of a strong she-wolf and her pack as she becomes the Most Wanted and Fearful wolf of all times! CC
No. of episodes: 4 (more episodes coming soon)
Customization: 3rd episode
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5573984106119168#.XDx1aSscdog.link
If you wanna do this, tell me so I can start reading your story! 
yea we can! i’ll read it now!
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Great! Since you have 3 chapters maybe we can do 3 for 3?
yes for sure!
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Hey ! I just saw your thread and I would like to do a Read 4 Read with you!
Here’s my story;
The Blood of Kane
Genre: Fantasy but it has also mystery, romance and drama in it.
Description: A mystery, full of the unknown and magical werewolf story! Discover the life of a strong she-wolf and her pack as she becomes the Most Wanted and Fearful wolf of all times! CC
No. of episodes: 4 (more episodes coming soon)
Customization: 3rd episode
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5573984106119168#.XDx1aSscdog.link
If you wanna do this, tell me so I can start reading your story!
Of course! I will send you a screenshot of the last chapter! I just spent like 20min now customizing the characters 
bahahahahahahaha thank you
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i just finished your story!! it’s amazing!! i genuinely loved it and the plot. it was all around great!
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Thank you so much!! It really means a lot!
I just finished your story too and I absolutely loved it. It just kept me wanting more and more and I couldn’t stop reading! Will definitely continue it when you release new chapters!
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Hi, I read your story. It’s pretty good. The story is suspenseful and well written. You certainly keep he reader in the edge and wanting more. The suspense is interesting. I hope the choices I make effect whether I solve he mystery or not.
Very well written and a good read. Well done.
Please read it, thanks!