Hey I read your story and sent you a screenshot.
It’s a good story, very cleverly thought out. Do you unlock achievements regardless what you chose? It seems like I was winning, no matter what decision I chose. I enjoyed reading it and for the most part, your directing is pretty good.
However, I couldn’t complete it. As you see from my final screenshot, that is the last part I reached. It just paused on that shot. At first I though it was a long dramatic pause, but after 20 seconds it was still there. I tried clicking the screen, but nothing. Is it a mistake? Did I make the wrong choice somewhere?
Otherwise, a pretty good story.
I finished your story and sent a screenshot to you.
It’s an ok story. Nothing really new, but certainly not bad. The costumes are pretty mobile standard. The story is a bit slow, but I’m hoping you are leading to something good. I do think the character development is well handled and I like the diversity in your stories. Good luck with it.
I finished your story and have Pm-ed you a screenshot from the final chapter. I quite liked your story. You do feel for the main character. It seems she’s bullied a lot and I’m glad it is starting to become a bit better for her. Only thing is, the “bad boy who has no respect for police” is a bit tired. Apart from that, your story is interesting. I like the way the characters are designed. Well done.
I sent you a screenshot from the final chapter to prove I read the whole thing.
Look, I’m not going to lie, bad boy stories have been done to death. I really have no interest in bad boys anymore. Your story is good and well directed and writer, but I just think the whole bad boy love interest have become so commonplace it’s now cliché. I do like how your main character seems to have doubt about changing for him and I do hope she does go back to who she was. If that’s what your planning I salute you. But turning into a “bad” character to get someone to like you is not the ideal message we should be should be sending to young readers.