Kikki and Sabel xx
Title: Blades of Desire
Author: Giselle C.
Genre: Mystery
Style: LL
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Description:
A rose, caught in the fire. Will you let that fire burn you to ashes, or will you fight to put it out? The choice is yours. |CC, CM, LGBTQ option|
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Iām very down for an R4R!!
Story: High school life
Author: inkkee
Episodes: 3 (story will be out soon)
Genre: romance / drama
Style: Limelight
Description: The story follows the life of a 17-year-old girl who is suffering from depression. What caused her depression ? Will she get better or will the depression get the best of her ? ( A little bit based off of authors own life.)
Hello, Iām interested in doing R4R with you.
Story: Benio
Author: Lia Lopez.
Completion status: 3 chapters (ongoing).
Genres: Comedy, romance.
Description:
What would happen if you ship a joyful, energetic, loud girl with a quiet, gentle guy who is willing to play along with her? Join Benio Castilloās life to find out! (CC)
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Hi again.
Finally had time to read your story and I have some constructive criticism.
Silent killer
- I donāt think the first scene fits in, it to short and got me confused. But love the scene with Iris Garcia, where she is running and having flash backs.
- The spot direction isnāt always correct.
- Also in the cafe the spot directing isnāt accurate - there knees is equal with the table (donāt think thatās how it is in real life) The same with the party, is she taller than Gabe?
- Characters are popping up at scenes.
- If she is a gang leader? Then she acts too nervous and kind. For instance when Gabe yells at her at the cafe.
- Showing up randomly at a party? Where she doesnāt know anybody without any guards?
- Love the cliffhanger.
- Remember new animation when you change scenes. (She is running, when they get to Gabes house, while he is standing still and talking)
Overall a great story.
Hi!
I saw your form is full, so I have saved it to my favorites to check later <3
Thanks for doing this!
Hi again.
Did you have a chance to read my story yet? I really want to know what you think and hope my review was helpful to you.