Read for review

Hi everyone!
I will be reviewing accurately (and help you fix eventual changes) your first chapter if your read the first 3 chapters of mine called “In Apnoea” (we can then talk about conditions for me reviewing more)
I will give an accurate review with constructive criticism and suggestions based on:

  1. Cover
  2. Title
  3. Plot
  4. Character looks and diversity
  5. Grammar
  6. Directing
    (7. Any cool art scene)
    (8. intro)

If you are interested you can text down below and PM that you read my first 3 chapters, I will get back with the review shortly after receiving that (keep in mind time zone etc)

NOTE: I suggest this to writers that have recently started their story, I will review either way but obviously if you wrote many many chapters already it may be less useful, whilst if you are at a low amount you can take any necessary changes (especially in plot)