Hi everyone!
I will be reviewing accurately (and help you fix eventual changes) your first chapter if your read the first 3 chapters of mine called “In Apnoea” (we can then talk about conditions for me reviewing more)
I will give an accurate review with constructive criticism and suggestions based on:
- Cover
- Title
- Plot
- Character looks and diversity
- Grammar
- Directing
(7. Any cool art scene)
(8. intro)
If you are interested you can text down below and PM that you read my first 3 chapters, I will get back with the review shortly after receiving that (keep in mind time zone etc)
NOTE: I suggest this to writers that have recently started their story, I will review either way but obviously if you wrote many many chapters already it may be less useful, whilst if you are at a low amount you can take any necessary changes (especially in plot)