My name is Lexie and I am a new author to Episode, it is really nice to meet you guys! I am currently looking for support from fellow authors and readers, as I am currently working on my first episode! I was wondering if anyone would be so kind to read at least my first chapter and just tell me your thoughts?! If you don’t have time, that’s fine too! I would be willing to read others stories in return as well. I am kind of new to Episode, so I am just reaching out to get some support, if you have any tips, tricks, opinions, or comments, I’d love to hear them! Thanks so much again, I really appreciate any help!
Thanks for your advice and taking the time to read it! I know I have some issues, but they get better as the story goes on! It was a bit rough at first, with the coding, but I think if you keep reading the mistakes become less and less frequent, I will consider going back and fixing them later on in the story for sure, thanks so much!
i like it so far, my only criticism would be that you don’t need to reference characters names so much when they are talking to each other.
and i agree with lexy19 with the idea about scenes or visuals