Read my first episode?

Hey losers :sunglasses:
I kinda got bored of writing my old story so I started writing a new one.
The first episode is really short so it wouldn’t really take a lot of time.
I’d appreciate it if you checked it out :slight_smile:
And use sound :wink:

Oh damnnnnn :heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes:

Your directing is so superb and the exact moment where the monster grabbed Renn was :ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand: The sound and music really added to the atmosphere and ep1 was really packed with suspense. The fact that previous choices evidently impacted the story was really refreshing and it made me think twice before deciding. It was really well done! Okay but there were some minor errors, the bag overlay popped up when she walked to it. (When i replayed ep1 it was already there so maybe it’s a gitch?? :thinking:) There was a strange zoom when she was talking to herself -before the line “This isn’t good.”
Other than that it was really well executed! Good job!

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Thank you :slight_smile:

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