Read my story? I need feedback

So I published some stories and I need feedback. I know that these are DEFINITELY not the greatest stories, and I am going to revamp them eventually, but I need feedback on what to do now to make the future chapters like they are revamped.
Please be honest with me. You will not hurt my feelings!:wink:

Here’s my very first story:

You are forced to marry a demanding psycho by the government, but what happens when you fall for the wrong guy?

Here’s my second story:

Two girls. One crush. Will you win over Justin Matthews’ heart before she does?

Here’s my last story:

Megan and Maeli, the world’s top spies have to go undercover to solve death threats…at a high school? Can the deal with the lies, betrayal, and craziness for the SECOND time?

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