Read my story&let me know what should I change about it :)

Just finished episode 9, it’s not the longest one, but I tried to add new things, hope you will like it. And I hope I didn’t make too much mistakes. If you see one make sure to mention it to me. :slight_smile:
Also I’d like to thank all of you for reading my story, it means a lot to me. Thank you! Lots of love xx