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Hello I’d love to do r4r with u!
My story is ‘the perfect crime’ by steph

Lemme know if u r up for it!

Yes up for it

So I read your story and your read mine?


    July 2

Hello I’d love to do r4r with u!

My story is ‘the perfect crime’ by steph

Lemme know if u r up for it!

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Hi j read the story. Very interesting but please work on the placement of your characters. It’s way too straight forward. If you want to make a story good, you have to trick the user. Way to dim when electricity goes off. Other than that, I like the plot.

Hey! Thank you for the honest feedback!(I rarely get those so I’m happy about it!) I tried to fix the character placement issue in the new episode and soon I’ll revamp the first few since I received several complaints about it!
I didn’t realize it’s too straightforward… Is it obvious who the killer is already? :scream::scream::scream:

I just finished reading your story!
I noticed some scenes where the characters are talking but they really aren’t (specially in chapter 2 where the MC speaks to (was IT) MISHILLS?)
ALSO the punching scene might need fixing too… But aside from that I do like the plot… I don’t often find stories about witches nor do I find stories using old English… Gotta say I’m impressed ( reminds me of my cultural civilization courses​:rofl::rofl:)

I’m interested in R4R
Title Mission Love Tracker
Author Iron Siren
Style Limelight
Episodes 12

My second newest released story! This story is based on true events. Paid arts. Let me know if you want to do a R4R! Let me know your thoughts. <3 I will release this story in Limelight soon. (=
STYLE: INK (LL will come out soon)
Description: When a childhood vision establishes reality, it’s worse than expected when boys come in the picture. Would you stay Friends Forever from what’s coming ahead? CC

Hi I’m reading your first episode and the 2 mean girls are so annoying lol

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And also in episode 2 the picnic scene I think you could make the characters look a bit more like kids by changing their size. For example, maybe letting my character wear ponytails and maybe a pink outfit. No makeup. Light lips

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how would I do that if you created the character?
and plus is jeremy is her face in the present scene and so that’s what he’ll see in a “flash"back”
I think you can’t tell the outfit is pink or yellow when its in black and white filter. so whats the point for changing the outfit
thank you tho

Mind if I promote mine?

Title: Deadly Secrets
Author: TamiRose
Genre: Fantasy
Chapters: 5

I would love to do r4r :))
Story - Ghost of Mona
Description - Jenny thought that she was a normal girl but one night she found out that she could…
Chapters - 5
Status - ongoing
Style - Ink
Genre - Mystery
Link -

I would like a r4r if you up for it?

TITLE: Dear Diary
AUTHOR: Brooklyn Woolf
GENRE: Romance (w/Drama)
DESCRIPTION: Ella Davis writes every experience in her diary which goes missing, the Davis family under watch over her fathers unpaid business and someone dies unexpectedly. Who is the suspect?
STYLE: Limelight

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