PLOT I think the plot is really unique and interesting. It is different from any other story I have read on this platform. It gives me Hunger Games vibes. It is full of suspense and mystery and leaves the reader wanting to know more.
Grammar Grammar is one of my biggest pet peeves. I can’t finish some stories due to the abundance of errors. However, this was not the case for your story. There were no visible grammars errors that I noticed.
Directing Overall, the directing was pretty good. I didn’t notice any huge errors. However, I believe either in the second or third chapter it looked as if Jason and Rhie were walking on the table. In addition, there were a few instances where the speech bubbles were in weird places or randomly jumped to weird places, but these minor issues didn’t have a negative impact on the overall story.
Choices I enjoyed the available choices. I really like stories where I actually feel like I have an impact on the story or at least the ending. I’m not sure if the choices have an actual impact on the storyline, but if they don’t they at least give the illusion of doing so.
SOUNDS I am really glad that music and sound is included in your story. It makes the story easier to read and sets the tone for each scene. I felt that the music choice for each scene went well with what was currently happening.
Overall 48/50 I really like the concept of your story. It has a very unique storyline. I already added it to my favorites and will continue to read it. I love the variety of characters and different personalities. I already have a strong feeling of who I like and dislike lol. There is a lot of mystery about what will happen next and how it will end. I’m excited to read more!
Here is my story information when you are ready to read it:
Episode Nickname : ARC
Story Title : Wanderer of Fallen Fate
Story Genre : Romance
Description : With the ability to see the deadly fate of anyone she touches, Phoenix attempts to prevent the untimely death of a handsome stranger.
Style : Limelight
Options : CC, Choices matter.
Episodes : 4
Instagram : @arc.episode
Link : [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4522080529088512]