Reading/Reviewing ongoing stories/ Read for read, [READ THE ENTIRE POST PLEASE]

[Venise]

Hey there so I read some episodes of your story

Go read mine if not done

Since you asked for critiques/feedbacks here are mines:

• You should allow the reader to customise Ezra and Luca. Personnally, I think that Ezra is everything but hot and handsome,like Maitre D was way much hotter lol but I like Luca hehe

  

• Give proper names to the outfits like I don’t know maybe “sexy in red” “ chill” “rock” “beautiful in blue” allowing the reader to have an idea of what’s the outfit is going to look like.

  
  

-I like Lily hehe she’s funny. I like her more than the MC ^^

• There’s a small issue in your dressing game code. You might have put two “ } “ instead of just one.
  

  

• That’s creepy lol I’ve always found that disgusting the whole Adam apple thinks ewww. But yeah some girls might like that haha.
  

  

• Funny when I read the name Ezra I was like “hehe PLL” and Fallon said it lol. And when I read Fallon I was like “Jimmy Fallon hehe”

[Venise]

Hey there I still am Your covers are adorable, I love theeeeemmmm!!! Do you’ve want a random r4r or feedbacks/reviews?

[Venise]

Hey so I read you’re story couple of days ago but I don’t remember telling you Now I do lol I sent you a message I think [stupid memory]

[CJM]

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*NEW STORY *

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Title: Loveaholic, the man of my dreams
Author: CJM
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 5 (ongoing)
Genre: Romance
In your dreams you will meet your true love. You would do anything to make your dream come true. Does he really exist?

[meadowh]

Would you like to do a review for review with me?

Here’s the link to my story:

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Trapped **Discontinued until further...

And here’s the cover:

If you’re interested, please pm me and we can read 3 chapters each and do a review on each chapter.

[Maggy]

Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ?

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Read and Review Forms

Here is the description of my story

Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy
Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 3 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment.

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5221523745800192

[Venise]

I’ve already filled out your form

[fluffyrice]

Haha, thank you! We’ll just do a r4r I’ll send you screenshot proofs soon

[fluffyrice]

@Venise all doneee ~

[OhhGlam26]

Thanks for the review! My next story, the characters will be customizable, but this is my first story, so I kept it simple. Keep reading! You could fall in love with Ezra beauty is only skin deep and he’s not dead UGLY so give him a chance

[Venise]

You’re right he’s pretty handsome but his hair well hehe

[OhhGlam26]

Venise, I really like your story so far! Maybe after the flashback/dream, have her wake up shocked so we know it was a dream. I didn’t really get that until the end of chapter 2. Also you make really pretty people, so I just kept them the same! Haha
I think the concept is great! And look forward to knowing more about the Mc’s past

[Aims1141]

Lol it’s fine!

[Venise]

@meadowh @fluffyrice @SarahDoodles Hey girls, I read your stories!

[fluffyrice]

Hey Venise! I got your fanmail and it made me laugh, haha. I appreciate your honesty. Thanks for taking the time to read it! It was a good read 4 read session!

[SarahDoodles]

Thank you! I’m gonna start yours now

[meadowh]

Thank you it means a lot hope you enjoyed!

[SarahDoodles]

Love it!

[ihicks01]

Title: DD: Rock Your Socks Off
Author: Isaiah H
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight (I wish it was ink)
Description: Baby is an aspiring dancer who gets caught up in a life or death feud all for the love of her life, Johnny…
Episodes: 3 (N/A)
Instagram: @isaiahwrites_episode

[Venise]

I prefer Limelight and if you’ve which it was Ink why did you chose to write it in Limelight? Anyway, read my story first, then when it’s done prove with a screenshot and I’ll read yours