I love how you put a trailer in so people can read short scenes which don’t give away much of what there is to come in the future. Also I like the use of overlays, I think it was very advanced. The short snippets of her family were very enjoyable. The use of sound enhanced my experience, and the way some people did not have names which was very mysterious and kept them anonymous. You showed the reader her past, ultimately I think that was a very good choice you made as now I understand a bit more about Linda.
Omg thank you so much! This really means a lot to me. I was so scared that people don’t like the characters but now I’m glad you think they fit well.
Yep, It’s on my list
Honestly even if people don’t like it I’d say keep them! It’s your story and how you envisioned them so why change it? I enjoyed the story and I understand the characters! In fact it was a pleasure to read your story :)
Thank you for reading and giving your opinion. I truly appreciate it. I am happy you enjoyed my trailer. I made the trailer for 2 reasons
- Wanted my story to be different
- Wanted to give the readers a clip on what the story will be like so they can decide if its something they will be interested and continue reading.
I also edited the trailer since I had a review that said I gave to much information so Reviews are great that way the author knows what they can improve.
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6668287837339648 I know I post my story earlier but here is the line when you get to it.
I’ll read it now!
Thank you @Maria.StoryWritter was very nice and told me how to fix a lot of my spot directing and things like that so I’m really hoping that it looks better and that you really like the storyline. Please don’t be scared to tell me the truth about it.
Here is my story
Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy
Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 6 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment.
Hi heres the link for my first story
Changing for bad.
Description: What happens when you’ve become the monster you once feared? Is everyone you once held dear gone forever? Can you undo what you don’t feel is broken to risk losing more? Limited CC
story: the case of love
genre: action
episodes: 3
description: Not everyone gets a happy ending. I mean isn’t it obvious? In a world full of criminals, you want to be a hero. You want happy endings. Too bad love, that’s impossible.
If romance might be your thing, here’s mine.
Story: Autumn Falls.
Author: Luna.
Genre: Romance.
Style: Ink.
Description: As Autumn falls in love for the first time, her life begins to fall apart. As a web of dirty secrets & lies unravel, a dangerous connection between their families is discovered.
Story Title: From Riches to Rags
Author: ErinH
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Instagram: forzanellabellezza.episode
Story Description: Forced into a terrible arranged marriage, Princess Elizabeth takes her fate into her own hands, and runs away from her destiny. With war looming ahead how will she fare on her own?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6090470465077248
Thank you so much for doing this
Here is my story if you would like to read it…
Story title, Fighting Over Him
Author… Silent Platinum
Story description… your living in a world of fantasy as a demon but will everything change when you find your self and your twin sister Fighting Over Him.
Story style… Limelight
If ya want follow me on Twitter @Platinumwritez
Here is a picture…
Hey, I’m Sandra and I’d really appreciate it if you’d check out my story!
Story Title: The Boys Next Door
Author: Sandra!!
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: When Emily’s boyfriend cheats on her, she’s convinced she’ll never be able to love again. That is until she meets her new neighbors…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6203650132541440
Also, if you’d like to message me any tips or anything of that sort, my instagram is @episode.sandra.
Thank you!!
I’ll get on to reading them now guys!
The link?
Link?
Probably not that good a story plz don’t judge