I’d love some feedback or a quick review on my first episode only!
I want to finally enter a contest
I’ll gladly do 2 reads per 1 review if you prefer.
There’s also a few backgrounds and splashes as an extra thank you if you’re interested!
Title: DD: Some Sort of Love
Episodes: 1, please don’t read 2 or 3. They’re being worked on still.
Description: Baby is determined to provide fun in the sun at Luna Resort! A cascade of characters have come to the island to make memories and maybe a few . . . mistakes?
1-I mixed up my covers, my large cover was supposed to be my small cover and vice versa.
2-I’m not done with episode 3, please don’t read!
3-If you can, I’d love some feedback to determine whether or not I should continue!