Real and Honest Reviews (FULL)

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Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…



Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Full CC/Choices Matter/Point System/Advanced Directing!:blush:

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Title: My Kalona
Author: Ray Edwin
Genre: Fantasy
Chapter Stats: 7 published
Expected Length: 15 chapters
Description: Naomi desperately tries to bond with her estranged father, but becomes the prisoner of a Native-American curse that threatens all. Will her choices lead to freedom or failure?
(NOTE: chapter length will vary depending upon your choices (hidden scene unlocks, hidden character unlocks, gain or loss of relationships ect…)

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Hi I fully revamped my story I would love a review

Title : The Star Necklace

Description : you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

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Your reviews will come at 7-8 :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::blush::slight_smile:

Rating 10/10
Your story was perfectly explained, amazing directing, amazing punctuation and grammar.The beginning was written beautifully but not as near as good as the whole story :kissing_heart::kissing_heart::kissing_heart:

Rating 7.9/10
Your story was good, A man who obviously is shy or anxious, I love it and when he described the girl, I loved it, but what I didn’t like was some of it was kinda dull and stuff I could find in other stories

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Rating 5.2
The beginning was already heading on a bad start, you told me how she was In a foster home and robbed 500 dollars, I wished it was a visual. the directing was very basic, and when she went to school, no BG characters,kinda unrealistic and made me lose a vibe.

And I felt like you were in a rush to get to the point of the story and you just completely ignored the big things. And it was all happening to fast*

Rating 9.8/10
I love the suspension and the great directing, it really made me want to read more, and how characters went missing IN LOVE
I wish you would have added more relatable backgrounds to what was going on in the story

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May I have the link

omg thanks so much! i really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! :grin::heart:

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No problem I love it. I need another episode

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Rating 6.4/10
Yes your story was unoriginal and unique, but I was expecting more than what you had, in a way it was basic and dull and wanted to make me click off
But what I loved was the real emotions poured into it

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saturday saturday


YASSS now I have a reason to wake up

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Thanks for the review. Dull stuff like? (I’m revamping it so I’m curious)

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For me, I would say add your own unique thing something so unique that I would be bamboozled

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Lol. Keep reading. It actually gets pretty crazy. I understand where you’re coming from though, that’s why I’ll add more scenes and less descriptions.

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This was so nice! Thank you for reading my story, I’m glad you enjoyed it! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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