Real and Honest Reviews (FULL)

I will keep reading :blush::blush:

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I didn’t enjoyed it, I fell in love with your story just likes @Marshmallow_O story

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MY KALONA BY: Ray Edwin

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4559018983227392

I’m sorry, I thought I had already linked it!

Thank you for your review I will try to work on those things

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Thank you for offering this! I have two stories, but you can just do one if you would like :slight_smile:

Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056

Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

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Hi, I would like to get a review for my story!

Title : Take My Heart
Episode Author : Jiya
Genre : Romance
Episodes : 1 (more to come)
Style : Ink
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4602924031868928
Description : Shawn visits NY to get away from his childhood love. But what happens when he meets an ordinary girl? Will she help him unite with his love or show him what real love is?

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My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? FullCC
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
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@AMagic
I have recently revamped. I would love some review about it.

  • Title: Black hearts Golden desires
  • Author: Madhu
  • Chapters: 6
  • Description: Nand , a sorcerer princess of Solataria has two beautiful loving sisters, her other two halves. But what will happen if it becomes the vice versa and an old enemy arises back for revenge? Will Nand be able to overcome it ? Or will she fail?
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Sure

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Thank you.

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I have to grab breakfast because I legit JUST woke up

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Haha Carry on.

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The Best You Can Get Is 250

Directing ~ 14/50
Custom Backgrounds ~ 10/50
Intro ~32/50
Spot Directing ~47/50
Story Plot ~ 43/50

Total Score ~ 146

Is this for my revamped version?

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Yes.
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I believe your story is a fantasy, everything was normal except that they powers, the ending of the first episode I wasn’t surprised or wondering what was gonna happen next. And Since they are twins shouldn’t their eye colors be the same or is that because of their powers. Plus all 3 of them were the same height, but then Madhu got taller? I was hoping to get some fantasy backgrounds. I felt like this was comedy instead of fantasy.

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I mentioned that clearly that they are triplets but their hair and eye color are alone changed due to their powers. This is the story based on reality magic. Soon the fantasy backgrounds will be displayed in my story it’s just the start, i am slightly disappointed of my rating to be honest. I will try to improve myself. Madhu got taller? May I know at which scene so i can correct it.

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When they went to their friends house.

These are real and honest reviews 🤷🏾‍♀
Hope you improve tho.

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I will check that out. I just needed to understand the plot first that’s y i gave the intro with a time travel. Can u pls read 2 and 3 and say your views about them if you don’t mind.

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Sure, I don’t have I life :grin:, why not

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okay i hope the others are interesting enough for you to read.

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