Real life horror story

Hello guys, I know that Halloween is just around the corner soon.

I wanted to promote my story because even though its drama based its a horror as well.

I have been told by readers “Its a classical version of flowers in the attic”
(If you have ever seen this film you would know there`s incest in the story, But there NOT in mine)

There`s also a twist at the end of the story, I hope you check it out :slight_smile:

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The title is Mum knows best right

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I will check it out

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Yea Mum knows best :slight_smile:

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I really liked the overlay usage/intro! The only problems I had were that there’s a lot of grammatical/spelling errors. None of the sentences end in punctuation . :heart: Dialogue shouldn’t come in paragraphs. That’s just my opinion :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:.
Good work so far! :heart_eyes:

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Thank you, Im trying to get through the spelling mistakes bit by bits, I had corrected upto chapter 9? So Im a bit confused if you saw any mistakes. I will go back through and have a look. thank you x

t’s a great story!

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Thank you lovely x

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Duplicate closed. Refer to newest: R4R? With some **Awesome SS**