Really honest story reviews! :) (closed becouse I'm not on often)

hheyyy :grin: i’m gonna revieuw your story! (published or unpublished) and i will give you advice and what i like/don’t like about your story!

some things you need to know:

-i will read every genre
-don’t use this for views, ONLY if you want a real review and real commentary on your story!
-if i don’t like your story, i will say it
-I only review the first episode!

sooo put your story details in the comments
and when i read it, i will send you the feedback through messages!


@LiyahxWrites DONE
@Yasmin77 DONE
@LillyR DONE
@Pentorama DONE
@Daisy_stories DONE

  1. @Marshmallow_O
  2. @RainbowCat
  3. @Dr.Smile07
  4. @Kalani-Santino
  5. @elliewrites.episode
  6. @Megz_Episode
  7. @writeslondon
  8. @JannahJackson
  9. @Josca
  10. @Bernice_J
  11. @jiya.episode
  12. @lizzy.writes
  13. @Ray_Edwin
  14. @Mayalina
  15. @jiya.episode

I’m really sorry but i’m not online that often anymore! I won’t do any revieuws becouse of it! sorry <3


I’ll take one :slight_smile:
Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Aaliyah Ali
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 5 (more to come)
Summary: How will Alana, Lucas, Ryan, and Rachel survive their past and conquer their future…
If bad behavior follows them everywhere they go?
cc, and choices available!
Style: Limelight



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i will review the first chapter noww :blush: :joy:

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Title: Omega Point
Genre: Action
Episodes: 3 and ongoing
Description: You get accepted into O.P.A to be part of the 100 Special Agents. But do you have what it takes to pass the constant challenges or will you be terminated like the rest 13?

I would appreciate it if you gave me some tips too👍

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Hi, could you do mine also?

Title: The Wedding Buddies
Plot: You’ve been in love with your wedding buddy Oliver since you can remember. Will you be able to resist him when you’re invited to HIS wedding?
Episodes: 4
Genre: Romance
Link -


i’m gonna read it in a vew minutess, it looks great :joy::ok_hand::heartpulse:

gonna read it in a bit :blush::slight_smile::heartpulse:
the plot looks so interestingg :joy:

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Hey, I’m always looking for feedback!

Title: Exodus V
Author: Pentorama
Genre: sci-fi, action/adventure
Style: LL


Description: When an evil force threatens to touch down on Earth, David is given a chance to turn his life around and make a difference. David must help his new group of friends prepare for the onslaught of the evil Rogue. David, however, will soon realize all of the lies, confusion, and heartbreak that comes with the task of saving the world.

Status: Four episodes and ongoing
Release schedule: I’m aiming for every Wednesday/ every other Wednesday
Link: Exodus V
IG: shane.pentorama

Thank you! :revolving_hearts:

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oohww i saw this story before, loved the story idea haven’t read it yet, looking forward to read it :blush:

this looks soooo cool😍

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hi there i’d love a review! :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Thriller
Style: Limelight
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters 5 (More to come)
Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

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I’ve got two stories, I hope that’s fine?


Title / Author: Adventurous: Project Humanity by Dreamer
Genre / Style: Adventure / LL
Description: In a world without sadness, your father starts a little project. What happens when you take part in it? Will you find your place in a world with new possibilities, new feelings?
Link: I’ll send you the link via pm because it’s not published yet and it’s for the contest


Title / Author: Dreams and Nightmares by Dreamer
Genre / Style: Romance / Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?

Thanks in advance! :slight_smile:

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yess it’s fine! they look great btw :smiley:

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sounds soo greatt :stuck_out_tongue:

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Thanks :blush:

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no preblemo :joy::heart:

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Tittle: MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile

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My story - Betting on a Double by Kalani Santino.
What happens when a teenager impersonates a dangerous criminal & gets his friends and himself into trouble with the wrong people… can he save himself & his friends?

would love a review thank you :slight_smile:

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Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

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Title: One Day
Author: Ellie
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: Best friends since the day they were born and when it comes to love, Its always been everyone but each other. They couldn’t possibly be meant to be, could they?


I would love to hear what you think and what I can improve on :slight_smile: thank you!

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